Saturday, February 24, 2007

SLC Haiku Bar Reviews: Lumpy's Downtown

Meat market simply
You go and you sit and watch
Never caring. No.

2 comments:

  1. Excellent. I hope that this will be one of a series. Necessary haiku.

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  2. Yes it is a new series.

    I like "necessary haiku."

    All haiku is necessary, in my opinion. Remember that old class Ralph W. designed? The Uses of Poetry. Keen.

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