Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Renga: Summer

Here is the renga so far. I think it has a couple more rounds in it:

Renga: Summer

A hot wind jostles
Dry wheat from its summer sleep
Sweat slides down my cheek [CG]

or are these tears? I have dreamt
a body turned green to gold [LB]

I have yet to lose
but losing comes in fast blows
to my consciousness [KT]

a body weary of heat
yearning for the sleep of fall [LK]

I enter the field
Merging with the golden wheat
One being, one self [CG]

Sorry I got so freaking Zen on the last stanza.


  1. Anonymous8:04 PM

    It's good to be one with the harvest


  2. Anonymous8:10 PM

    the night is young,
    Renga anyone?


  3. Glad you got the joke, dummy.